雅思 G 类小作文写作技巧

雅思 G 类小作文 4 个评分标准

  • Task achievement 任务完成。purpose 目的、tone 语气、answer all points 回答所有的问题点
  • coherence and cohesion 连贯性和一致性
  • vocabulary 单词
  • grammar 语法

G 类书信写作 7 个步骤

  1. 阅读任务,高亮关键词
  2. 选择合适的语气,正式或者非正式的书写
  3. 选择合适的欢迎和结尾
  4. 确定这封信大体上的目的
  5. 确定段落接口 (开始 - 任务 - 结尾)
  6. 了解每一段的目的 (thinking、explaining、complaining)
  7. 为每一个要点想一个主意
  1. Read the task and highlight key things
  2. Choose the “tone”: formal, informal
  3. Choose an appropriate greeting and ending
  4. Decide on the overall purpose of the letter
  5. Decide on the paragraph strcuture
  6. Know the aim of each paragraph
  7. Think of an idea for each point

Formal letters 正式书信

读题目,高亮关键词: Party company hotel manger pleased improves 建议 G 类写 5 个 paragraph
  1. purpose 目的
  2. three parapraph:describe、explain、suggest 3 个任务点
  3. ending 结尾
less common vocabulrary
  • the party that my company held ( hold 比 have 更正式)
  • the event commemorated(纪念,庆祝,比 celebrate 正式)
  • everything went according to plan (按照 go according to)
  • a thoroughly memorable evening
  • we were particular impressed by
  • personel 人员,members of the events team
  • welcoming and attentive
  • ensured that the party ran smoothly (运行顺利)
  • care could have been taken with
  • it would have been nice to see
  • struggled to find the events room
  • consider improving your signage
  • hosting such a special event
正式场合下称呼和敬语使用 没有名字的时候 Dear Sir or Madam - Yours faithfully 有名字的时候 Dear Mr. Smith - Yours sincerely 第一个句子,通常陈述这封信的目的 First sentence, stating the purpose of the letter, for example
  • I am writing with regard to
  • I am wiring to request / to ask for
  • I am writing to thank you for
  • I am writing to inform you that
  • I am writing inform you fo my decision to
  • I am writing to complain about
  • I am writing to bring to your attention 我写信是想让你知道,通常表示引起某人的注意
最后一个句子,用正式的方式结尾 Final sentence, ending in a formal way
  • On behalf of all of my colleagues, I would like to thank you for … 代表我的同时,我想就 … 感谢你
  • Thank you for your help and support
  • I look forward to receving your reponse
  • I await your prompt reponse 期待您的几十回复
  • I hope that you will adress these concerns as soon as possible
  • Please let me know if you require any furture information
  • I hope that my request does not cause your any in convenience.
3 点提示
  1. 正式信件避免缩写, I am 而不是 I‘m
  2. 避免直接的问题, I would like,not can I have
  3. 避免使用 !exclamation marks

Inform letter 非正式书信

  • look forward to catch up with you
  • something has come up
  • I’m not going to be able to make it
  • we haven’t had a proper chat
  • a conference that runs from … to…
  • to rush back
  • we’re being treated to a meal
  • I’m expected to attend
  • On a more positive note,
  • I’ll be cooking a meal at my place
  • you’re more than welcome
  • come along
Informal 常用的短语和句子 Beginning and ending Dear Simth - Best wishes, Best regard, See you then! All the best,

开头句

  • I hope you’re well
  • I hope this letter finds you well
  • I hope you enjoyed
  • I‘m just writing to let you know that
  • I‘m just writing to thank you for
  • I just wanted to write a quick letter to tell you…

结尾句

  • I hope to see you soon
  • Hope to see you then!
  • Enjoy youre stay/trip/holiday
  • Best of luck with your
  • I’m sure you’ll have a great time
  • Keep in touch!
  • Say hello to the family
  • I look forward to catching up with you soon

Seimi-formal letters 半正式的书信,在雅思考试不存在!

非正式不同场景下,常见的短语和句子

感谢场景 Thanking someone

informal
  • I‘m just writing to thank you for
  • I can’t thank you enough for
  • Thank you so much for … It was really kind of you
formal
  • I am writing to thank you for
  • I am grateful for
  • We would all like to thank you for

请求场景 Requesting

informal
  • I hope you don’t mind me asking, but could your possibly…?
  • I’d be really grateful if you could
  • I’m just writing to ask wether you could
  • It would be greate if you could
formal
  • I have decided that I would like
  • I would therefore ask that you
  • I would also like you to
  • I was wondering if it would be possible for me to
  • I would be grateful if you could
  • I would like to request that you
  • I would appriciate it if you could

提出建议 Making a suggestion

Informal
  • I was wondering if you would like to
  • why don’t we
  • Why don’t you
  • You’re more than welcome to
  • And don’t foget to
Formarl
  • I would like to suggest that you
  • Another solution would be to
  • As the misktake was caused by your company,I hpoe that you will

问题/理由:Problem/excuses

Informal
  • I’d love to accept your invitaion, but unfortunately…
  • I’m afraid I won’t be able to
  • Sorry I didn’t write to you earlier, but
  • This is why I didn’t have time to
Formarl
  • I am writing to complain that
  • I would like to express my dissatisfaction with
  • I was extremely disappoionted / unhappy with
  • Unfortunately
  • As a result of this error, I was unable to
  • The issue that most concerns me is
  • I hope that you will address this problem / these concerns as soon as possible

道歉场景, Apologising

Formal
  • I would like to apologise for
  • Please accept my sincere apologies

正式和非正式的词汇

Informal:              Formal: Buy                      Purchase Answer                Respond At first                 Initially Enough               Sufficient A lot  of               Many/ Much/ Numerous Need                   Require Right away          Immediately Try                        Attempt Ask for                 Request Also                      Moreover That's why           Therefore Better                  Superior   Old                       Elderly Cheap                  Inexpensive Costly                  Expensive Next                     Subsequently Tell                       Inform Leave                  Depart Wrong                  Incorrect Fix                        Repair Live                      Reside Home                   Residence Start                    Commence/ Begin Whole                  Entire Get                       Acquire / Obtain Watch                  Observe [Simon 雅思小作文范文](https://www.ielts-mentor.com/writing-sample/gt-writing-task-1/23-ielts-sample-questions/3216-band-8-9-ielts-letters)